Words
This is a new poem I wrote. It’s called Words, and I wrote it for someone who read worrds today that weren’t the nicest. THIS POST HAS BEEN EDITED.
Words pour out of my mouth,
Like the tide pours onto a beach,
Sometimes those words are as sweet as strawberries,
Or as spur as bleach.
Sometimes words put a smile on your face,
That is fifty metres wide.
Sometimes words make you look stronger,
BUt you’re crumbling on the inside.
Words can be soft,
Gentle kind things,
Or sharp as a sword,
Ready to poke and sting.
Ready for action,
Ready for hurt,
Ready to leave you,
Sprawling in the dirt.
They can be typed,
They can be said,
They can leave you for hours,
Crying in your bed.
They can make your life good,
Or make your life hell.
They can make you feel terrible,
Or make you feel swell.
BUt at the end of the day they’re words,
Beautiful, magical, hurtful, foul words.
All my words,
Pouring out like water from a bottle,
Hurting you, mocking you.
And for that,
I’m sorry.
July 7, 2009 at 1:21 pm
sorry that the last bit couldnt exactly rhyme. I had to be quick and i didnt want to write somethinbg like
“and for that,
you get a sorry from me and my cat”
xx kk_bbz
July 9, 2009 at 12:39 am
Thats, like, amazing & really true (:
July 9, 2009 at 1:54 pm
Great Poem Parneaus
I best bits were;
“BUt you’re crumbling on the inside.”
and
“My disgusting words,”
Very powerful words.
I don’t really like the ending, it looks a bit irregular.
I would have ended it like this:
“My disgusting words,
They still pour out”
But I haven’t got a clue about poetry, so I’m probably completely wrong
.
Brilliant poem anyway
.
July 13, 2009 at 8:41 am
I have changed the end, because when I looked over the poem and read it, not only did it seem irregular, but it also made no sense and I am the one who wrote it!!!!!
July 9, 2009 at 1:55 pm
Sorry for the spelling mistakes on my comment, caffeine does not help your brain lol.
July 12, 2009 at 5:38 pm
heehee!!! Thanks for the tips on poetry, I will think of that in future writings
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