Comments on: Words http://parneaus.wordpress.com/2009/07/07/words/ My Life, My Thoughts, My Blog... Tue, 22 Dec 2009 23:20:44 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: kk_bbz http://parneaus.wordpress.com/2009/07/07/words/#comment-644 kk_bbz Mon, 13 Jul 2009 08:41:46 +0000 http://parneaus.wordpress.com/?p=803#comment-644 I have changed the end, because when I looked over the poem and read it, not only did it seem irregular, but it also made no sense and I am the one who wrote it!!!!! I have changed the end, because when I looked over the poem and read it, not only did it seem irregular, but it also made no sense and I am the one who wrote it!!!!!

]]> By: kk_bbz http://parneaus.wordpress.com/2009/07/07/words/#comment-643 kk_bbz Sun, 12 Jul 2009 17:38:01 +0000 http://parneaus.wordpress.com/?p=803#comment-643 heehee!!! Thanks for the tips on poetry, I will think of that in future writings ;) x heehee!!! Thanks for the tips on poetry, I will think of that in future writings ;)

x

]]> By: James Bailey http://parneaus.wordpress.com/2009/07/07/words/#comment-641 James Bailey Thu, 09 Jul 2009 13:55:56 +0000 http://parneaus.wordpress.com/?p=803#comment-641 Sorry for the spelling mistakes on my comment, caffeine does not help your brain lol. Sorry for the spelling mistakes on my comment, caffeine does not help your brain lol.

]]> By: James Bailey http://parneaus.wordpress.com/2009/07/07/words/#comment-640 James Bailey Thu, 09 Jul 2009 13:54:37 +0000 http://parneaus.wordpress.com/?p=803#comment-640 Great Poem Parneaus I best bits were; "BUt you’re crumbling on the inside." and "My disgusting words," Very powerful words. I don't really like the ending, it looks a bit irregular. I would have ended it like this: "My disgusting words, They still pour out" But I haven't got a clue about poetry, so I'm probably completely wrong :P. Brilliant poem anyway :). Great Poem Parneaus
I best bits were;
“BUt you’re crumbling on the inside.”
and
“My disgusting words,”

Very powerful words.
I don’t really like the ending, it looks a bit irregular.
I would have ended it like this:

“My disgusting words,
They still pour out”

But I haven’t got a clue about poetry, so I’m probably completely wrong :P .

Brilliant poem anyway :) .

]]> By: kforster022 http://parneaus.wordpress.com/2009/07/07/words/#comment-638 kforster022 Thu, 09 Jul 2009 00:39:55 +0000 http://parneaus.wordpress.com/?p=803#comment-638 Thats, like, amazing & really true (: Thats, like, amazing & really true (:

]]> By: kk_bbz http://parneaus.wordpress.com/2009/07/07/words/#comment-637 kk_bbz Tue, 07 Jul 2009 13:21:54 +0000 http://parneaus.wordpress.com/?p=803#comment-637 sorry that the last bit couldnt exactly rhyme. I had to be quick and i didnt want to write somethinbg like "and for that, you get a sorry from me and my cat" :) xx kk_bbz sorry that the last bit couldnt exactly rhyme. I had to be quick and i didnt want to write somethinbg like

“and for that,
you get a sorry from me and my cat”

:)

xx kk_bbz

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